Two quick notes,
First, I went back and put in some section breaks in my last poem. I re-read it today and I think it will help other readers find a better rhythm to it.
Also, the next two flash fiction posts will be a two parter. Telling a story in a disjointed manner for me has been a lot of fun, but the story for this part is a little longer than a typical post. Enjoy!
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